4/5 :] it was really cute and i really liked its simplicity. The flow wasnt perfect, but perfect is a lil wow. lmfao yes.. anyways it was really cute! keep writting. ^^

I liked it . It`s different from other love poems I`ve read . The whole smile thing is original, but you wrote about it in a different way . It wasn`t totally ah`mazing, but it was pretty good (:
& thank you for the comment . in fact, I think you`r interpretation is pretty accurate . cuhs` honestly that`s how I see myself xD
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I liked this one nice poem our poetry club rules. 5/5

Aww, this poem is really quite sweet. I like how youve discribed the person who see's you evntering the corridor. This poem is quite simple and a little short yet i quite enjoyed it. I like the old lanuage youve used hear, "Oh, ye of little faith" i mean not many people use ye nowadays but youve used it in this poem and youve made it worked even though the rest of your poem isnt like that. I liked the end of it, it was a good conclusion considering the poems nature. To improve i suggest you use ounctuation in your writing, but other then that good job! Keep writing! xx