This was wonderfully written Jenna Dear. it made me want to keep on reading on. it was grand. i loved the words you played on and the way you wrote it in general.. <3 Terra

Wow good rhyming, and it was a good read, I didn't want to stop.

I'm sitting here with my mouth open, speechless. I was expecting this to be about the book, but when I read this, uh, just speechless! It was beautifuly written. The imagery... the blood, the bones, the guns, the alley... everything was just amazing... But, c'mon now, I have come to expect nothing less from you. :) Keep it up babe!

heartcha.

xxCiaoxx
Pee.Ess. Numbers and Symbols eventually have a meaning... :P

Wow, another brilliant poem. I was wondering, did you get the idea from this from the novel, "The Lovely Bones" by Alice Sebold? Was just wondering, because I love that book!

"And he locks the door as he pushes you against his desk,
And you cry, knowing that you can't simply protest,"

^ I don't know if it's just me, but in the second line, if you swapped 'can't' and 'simply' around, I think it would sound better:
"And you cry, knowing that you simply can't protest."

Excellent work.

K, i dont see the point in even commenting anymore. I should just read it and vote a 5. I wish i could say something more but u leave me speechless.

5/5