Hey,
this is such a great poem. really sorrowful and deep. i love the rhyming..definitely makes it flow smoothly. your choice of words was great..nicely penned. overall such an emotional poem filled with pain..a beautiful write! keep it up! =]
and if you ever need to talk just PM me and I'll be here to listen. Don't Give UP!
all the best
--Viola

ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

luzaN

So much Depression for such a young person. I find it sad myself that you seem burden. I'vve been in that emotion for a little bit of the time. Well, nice write, keep up the awsome work.

This is deep, im loveing it... your talent is outstanding, i wish i had some talent like your for my poetry, i havent worte in a while all my poeps are from 4 years ago.. lol, but keep up the work... i love it...

WOW. the ending just really got to me. its exactly how i feel. no one would care. i think its true too.

This poem almost ripped my heart out

i use to cut...and even though things have gotten better and i have stopped

the poem made the scars burn
a very deep and fromt he heart poem
not many people can write this amazing
but you surely have the talent

brilliant job!

~Shannon~

Wow what a sad poem. I understand exactly how you feel i use 2 cut and the stopped but my brother passed away less than 2 weeks ago along with a really close friend of mine. they both overdosed and tragically he is now gone. My boyfriend who i loved broke up with me cos i didnt actually tell anyone why i was so depressed and just kept using other things as excuses but 2day a whole lot of people found out and saw all my cuts. this poem was amazing. i loved it. iit was so so well written. great joob, your words were truly haunting