I REALLY like this. 5/5 :D
you should read some of mine...
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=877815

Oh man, if this is true, I really feel for you. I would hate to say that to someone and then have them reject you. I LOVED the ending by the way, it was very clever. Nice poem, man.

P.S. Thanks for the comment.