Honestly, one of the best poems ive ever read in my life.
the concept seems simple, but it is so much more complicated. knowing u need the good and bad to reach ur goals is displayed very well in this.
deciding to "dance in the rain" as u say, has an underlying meaning of just to keep going, and it is absolutely perfectly written.
love ya lots,
16 years ago
by Prophecies In Kodak
The form was sketchy, but so is mine. xD So I can't say much other than that.
I liked the description and the visualization you gave in this poem. I could almost see a story? I liked your vocabulary as well.