Comments : In Pursuit of a Rainbow

  • 14 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Honestly, one of the best poems ive ever read in my life.

    the concept seems simple, but it is so much more complicated. knowing u need the good and bad to reach ur goals is displayed very well in this.

    deciding to "dance in the rain" as u say, has an underlying meaning of just to keep going, and it is absolutely perfectly written.

    terrific job,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 14 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    The form was sketchy, but so is mine. xD So I can't say much other than that.
    I liked the description and the visualization you gave in this poem. I could almost see a story? I liked your vocabulary as well.

    5.5