Comments : Right Side of the Bed

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sounds like a day I am sure many have had before...lol

    Good job :)
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    And i guess you would have won the competition with this excellent poem. well done.

    5/5 david

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    That's a really cool poem. Very cute...

    Josie

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very nicely done....some days are just beyond words! All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    HAHAHA
    Ohhh this made me giggle.
    You write humorous poems really well, you should be proud.
    I want to see more =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Lmao! I can't believe i missed this!!
    It's excellent!
    Some of the lines were a little long compared to others but it's hardly noticable, especially when you're busy giggling, lmao
    I hope it wins! You should write in this catagory more often!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Nice poem, but i dont think the flow was perfect, it could've been better. The ending was incredible, i loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    You are really rising here as a great and versatile poet. This is again a very lovely write. Loved the way you presented everything and the theme you selected..well most of us go through it...but its mostly the hangover which make us late.. :o))

    great write

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    "Traffic is ridiculous, can it go any slow" It should be slower but I know that you put it that way for the rhyme scheme. lol this was such a cute idea I loved it.. and its true what a difference waking up on the right side of the bed can make.

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Thats a cool poem :D:D

  • 17 years ago

    by Hrtbr8ker89

    This is a good poem...I think you could make it shorter....

  • 17 years ago

    by Untamed

    Haha the BEST. 5/5

  • Ha ha, I loved it. It's full of sense of humor. I remember this happening to me also. Great job. 5/5

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