Comments : Be More Beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Goed poem, gives a good expression of how you feel after a relationship is over ...
    well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Nice write. i enjoyed reading this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Oh, this was so sad. It's really tough getting over someone who loved dearly.
    Brighter days are bound to come.
    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    I like the foreshadowing from "Now, I don't feel beautiful anymore" to the last line..very well done, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd