Hey,
Wow it's great to see that so many members join in and wrote a poem togerther. Thats really cool. Lol, wel you all did an excellent job on this poem! I have to sday i really enjoyed it. I like how the whole nation seem to be grieving. It just works so well. The rhyming was good and none of it seemed forced at any point. The structure could of used some work but i thought the overall flow was good. Good vocabulary usage. A good read, keep writing all of you! By the way the user "Sherry" profile ID has been put twice in the bottum of the poem.

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