Gem
Great Haiku. Nice word choices.
Take Care Love Cindy

Great Haiku. When I close my eyes, I can see myself laying on a raft on the cystal blue waters. Relaxing.
BTW - that was 18 syllables. Just giving you a hard time :)

This is a wonderful Haiku. The descriptions vividly paint a brilliant picture of the golden sun's reflection on the water--as clear as crystal. Nice work, ma'dear! =]
Love,
Debbie

Very nice! Great choice of word usuage too!

Natalie``

Gem,

I'm sure I have said this to you before, but I so envy those who can write a Haiku. So much beauty wrapped up in so few words. You did a great job on this.

Always,
Jeannie

Good imagery and word choice. Since the Haiku form is so short, they are sometimes hard to pull off, you have done an excellent job!