Ciao dear, this is wonderfully written!! I love it, all your poems have so much emotion and grace! I love the story behind it as well, it's wonderful!! Flow, word choice, everything, it's awesome!! 5/5 for sure!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Awe Ciao Honey I loved it! I'm glad I never sent in mine for Terra, this one is way better...if this is for that, seems to me like it is haha. Anyways, another great write =)

5.5

I love the story your poem told. It's very sad, and it's something that can actually happen and i'm sure it has in someone's life. Very captivating piece. i loved it. Never stop writing, love! Take care!

` Liz =]
5/5