Comments : Atleast I'll Be Skinnny...

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    "Atleast I'll be skinny... "

    ^ Ah but you wont be skinny enough will you? Thats the thing with eating disorders...
    But still this poem is really sad and heartfelt. It really touiches you. And i think this poem will raise awareness of eating disorders, how the perosn feels. It's so sad yet so true. Liked your punctation usage on this one. Lol. Anywyas take care hun. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I don't know what to say here. that was so sad, and so dark. I felt emtions strong and clear. The flow was excellent, well pinned again 5/5