Awesome poem very different from your other ones...and i likethe style u used...

Ashleigh

Nice poem.
I love the choice of descriptive words you used.
Ew bugs haha, They creeep me out.
Keep it up.
Bec

Very good poem, really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Hey,
nice poem, i love your choice of words,
it flows nicely and the rhyming is done great 5/5
kisses stephanie

This is neat love your coice of words thanks for the comment on "My Superhero"