This is so cute. Different from the other love poems I read, this one was really good to read and had great flow. On this line:

"Dont hesitate to to ask me"

Take off one 'to' lol, thats all I got. Anyways, take care. 5/5!!

Too sweet. Emotions were so clear. I'll give this heart-filled poem a 5/5.

-BitterSweet

Hey darl touching poem vey well written xx