Another great poem.
The flow was great and the emotion was deep.

'Memories of us cant die.
But now they are burning in my hands'

Beautiful 5/5

[Sarah]

There was a mistake in the first word, I think you meant to write 'Falling'. This was a good poem, it had a few errors, but that's fixable. I really liked this one as well. Memories are such a painful things at times.