Great poem. I loved it:) I think it would be better if it was longer but it is great the way it is. Another 5/5.

YOu got your message out. short and sweetly. I liked this one. the flow was fantastic, and the descrptions were vivid. You did another well done job. Keep writting.

Yup this poem is certainly something i love it. :D good write i hope to be seeing more of your work in the future.

xxx alex xxx

oh and thank you for reading my poem :D