This is pretty good... and you did end it in a very good way... Nice structure and flow and you do describe panic pretty well ...

Very enjoyable =)

Hey,
an awesome poem, the flow was terrific and as well as the rhyming, you did a good job on describing a panic attack, good work 5/5
kisses Stephanie

Beautiful poem it was sad but true it was real and raw and thats what I loved about it
congrats on such a wonderful piece of poetry
laters