Cute porm

Type 0, cute poem/5

That's really pretty

This was original.
I have to admit.
I haven't read anything
About their baby.
So I was kind of glad.
Although...
This poems was really, really forced.
I have to say, it went throught the whole poem.
It didn't flow as well as it could have
So I was kind of disappointed :[.
I refuse to vote.
I don't want to lower your rating right now.

What a lovely write and I am sure you will do your best ,its isn't easy being a mum but it is rewarding.

It was a good concept
it was filled wit emotion
and evident love for your child

Raising a child alone is hard I agree but as for that being the main subject driving the poem the title was abit misleading just a thought Plot121

Beautiful write!it was cute...it portrayed the feelings towards a child in a successful manner..though the flow was li'l off...the poem was cute...5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Gurl i love this poem its really good keep up the great work.

This is really good...its sweet...but the flow wasnt that great...and your form wasnt really working..first it was two lines..then two lines again..and then three...and it kinda threw the poem off a little.

This is one of the favorites i have read of your work keep up the good work :]