"as i steadily gaze upon the sky fighting over and
over again with my wills and desires
as i forcefully think of ways how to get rid of him
Love begins to grow,"

Aside from the technical errors, I find this piece rather beautiful. I especially loved the above lines. Of course, human emotions--like Life--is not constant, but rather, a constant change. And sometimes it makes the heart our reason's foe, then something wonderful happens--love grows. =]
I really like this piece