I really liked it, it had really good rhyme and rhythm

Thanks guys,

I'm so glad you liked it : )
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Very heart touching write. Great job!

One day the gloom will end,
But she will tell you otherwise.
A smile, God will send,
To clear the water from her eyes.

Love this stanza.
Take care Cindy

Thanks ^_^

um....what's a stanza? O___o

You did an excellent job on this one. the flow was great, the word choice unmistakably amazing, and the emtions were strong and clear. 5/5