Comments : Rainy Day

  • 16 years ago

    by The Red Brumby

    I thought this was very interesting and perhaps better left unfinished.... you are a very good Poet Mr Simon... Keep up the good work :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I thouyght your unfinished poem, ended perfectly. As always you did an excellent job with the imagery. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    I agree - like the ending and the imagery =)