Comments : White Feathers Rain

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Very beautifully written. It was an amazing read. Great flow, well pinned, excellent show of emtion. 5/5 keep up the good work. I love your poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    This poem was soo very cute, I didn't understand some of it though, but in all. Oh my, it was amazing. Soo cute, made me smile!! I especially loved :
    "Every answer stays the same
    Oh an angel feels such sorrow
    Doesn't know of what became
    Or how to survive tomorrow"
    That stanza was soo amazing!!
    Great job!!!!
    Alissa:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is really good. i enjoyed reading it very much. it flowed so nicely. wonderful job on writing it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Wow very nice poem. you did a great job on this one. i love the abab rhym and the flow was great.

    The angel covers you in a coat
    Blanketed in a shield
    Around you angel feathers float
    Love: the greatest weakness, the strongest feeling...
    On can ever wield.

    this last stanza was really good, you ended the poem very nicely. 5/5 and keep up the good work.