I wasn't too fond of this poem. I loved the last stanza, but I guess the rest seemed.. eh, Almost as if you didn't mean any of it. You know? I'm sure you did, but it just seemed as if you could have said it a lot better.

You did do a great job though, I loved the poem. Once again, though.. periods, commas, and such would help.

4/5

This was okay, i didn't really like it that much, cause it was kind of confusing, but overall you did a good job writing it. 4/5

~Kristina

Wow. I loved this one. It really appealed to me, I don't know why. My favourite stanza was the third one,

'Shivers, sweet, down my spine
Like the first buds of spring
I take the feeling and make it mine
Make it blossom, make it ring'

Especcially [sp] the third line.

Definately my favourite of yours.

Sole. x