by Cindy
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Gem |
by Krzysztof J
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Oh dear lol i have all those things besides that special someone and im not 30 lol |
by *Charisma*
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Lol funny ending! love the wine rack stanza. Good to see some new stuff from ya! |
by Jenni Marie
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HAHA this made me giggle, particularly the last stanza. |
by Wallace
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A good poem, nice flow and some meaning to it, and i liked the ending, good job. |
by Poetess Lana
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Yay!!! =) lol this made me smile after reading such a sad poem... you are an amazing writer!!!! |
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As I'm reading this, I'm thinking wow I have a lot to do to catch up. But then I got to the end and I was depressed. It's just around the corner. |
by Midnight Sun
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Comment #5~ |
by Debbie
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It started reassuringly, implying that the age of 30 is one of your 'fruitful' years in life. =] It made me feel relieved, although I'm still 15! Haha. But the cocluding stanza only... well, made me think--nawww... Haha. |
by Regret
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I loved the poem |
by carissalynn
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Silly |
by debbylyn
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Cute! How we all dread those next decade milestones...I actually remember a time when thirty seemed old to me...sigh... |
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Haha I absolutly LOVE the ending!! |