Wow. real deep and powerful poem
the repition of your line really made a good effect
all together it's 5/5
I loved it!
beautiful piece of poetry!

Amazing job...
This poem hit me hard.... I'm going through my own mini heartbreak - so yeah...

"Well what can I say?
It's just hard to believe,
That you did this to me,
It's getting harder to breath.

Well what can I say?
Nothing much I guess,
I can't say anything,
I'm just such a mess."

^ My favorite 2 stanzas.... I can feel the pain pouring through every word... The flow was great & the vocab. was good...

Superb write! Keep it up. =] 5.5
Stephanie Lynn .+.