It's sad..

Its sad but a good poem :)

Very nice poem! I hate far distance love, your poem describes it. Well done

I can relate to this poem.. I think one more stanza would help it out. But it was good, the flow was pretty good. Nice work. =) You have potential.
~Ally~

I liked:) Another 5/5 keep up the grear work. Never stop writing.

Hi Alex,

I really liked this poem! "If only I had held you in my mind a little longer" line was divine.

I think you really felt these words, and it shows in your imagery.

Well done x

Sad..poem. but it was a wonderful read. You have much talent, please keep writing...but id love to see longer poems...please ;) id love to read them.

Excellent poem, very sad but true again,and again we have so much in common, very well written, 5/5. I sure the same with someone I met, so deep in love ,but so many miles away,bless you,your friend Tracy,,,,,,,p.s keep up the good work

Superb dear! Its perfect with an awsome flow n da best selection of words like choice n choose. wow 5/5 u sheer deserve

This is so heartwrenching...I have tears in my eyes..
Beautiful flowe throughout, well portrayed imagery and the emotion behind the words are clear for the reader to sense.