Comments : The Last Eve

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem of love. You have a way with your words no matter what subject you write on. Imagery on this piece is wonderful.

    And if we are to meet again by circumstance
    unknown.
    It was not a dream that last eve when two lonely souls
    found a home.

    Loved your ending
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was such a beautiful love poem.
    Excellent job.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very sad and romantic love poem......

    The softness of your voice, the splendor of your
    lips, none could ever be as sweet.
    Walking on white sands, suspended in contentment
    waves crashing at our feet.

    Beautiful...............5/5 Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cooper

    Absolutely beautiful. A splendid romantic poem...fantastic job.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Come tomorrow's sun, do not cry for we both
    know I must depart.
    I'll carry our memories together always and forever
    in that special place in my heart.

    this is just so beautiful...so touchy..loved it

    keep writing friend

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by ashtyn

    Hi i love ur^poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Candy 3y3s

    The poem so nice! It contained so much imagery and just caught your attention. Great job, Ben!

  • 16 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Wow well written but more then anything it speaks to its readers. it made me remember that one love i had but distant seperated us...wow

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Beautiful and nice way to end the poem... Great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    Hey that was a great poem. lovely definition of love and the emotions behind every act. i expecially like how u ended this one....nice work mate xxx