First off i wanted to thank you for ur comment. honestly i didnt think my poem was that good or any of my poems really but other people tell me their really good so yea. but i really liked ur poem. its nice and i can relate as well. Its a good poem and i think u express ur self well. its good. keep it up

LYRIC

I usually don't like reading love poems, they're too mushy and cliched nowadays. Nonetheless, you did pull me into this one.

"S ing with me a sweet love song
U ntil we both can't breathe"

^^ Those lines were AMAZING. Something about them really got me, and I loved this.

5.5

Its very catchy and a interesting way of writing it :)