Awww ^.^ I really really like this poem. It has so much emotion. Made me feel like crying [reminds me of my last relationship]
I have to say great job on this one. Xx Chrissie

This was so bittersweet.
My favourite part was the last line, it has a lot of impact.
I thought the flow was good throughout and the depth and emotion shine through the words.
You did a good job with this.

This is so sad. Your emotons really come through in your words.
Good job!
Keep writing.
Take Care Cindy