Aw this poem to is very sad.. I think that the first stanza was my favorite because it shows how much you want the relationship with your father but all of the pain that you are going through because of that (If I miss read that then I'm sorry). Interesting job.

Again, I am moved to tears. You write just what you feel , but you do it in a way that lets the reader feel it with you everytime they read your poems. Very stronly written, again please keep up the good work, and If you'll keep writting, I'll keep reading.

Wow...it looked like i could feel what you've written...
that's awesome...
(i can't do that...=P)
now, really, it's a very good written poem...
i loved it...=D
keep going
*isabel*