The only problem I found here was the flow was a little forced.
I have a few suggestions to improve this, not telling you to change it but just for future refrence. :]

"You promised that everything would be alright,
[That we would end this and no longer fight.]"

By making the line shorter it makes the flow stronger because the structure doesn't change for each line.

"But wait, wot's this i see a tear
In your eyes full of fear"

Again just making the flow more steady.

Your grammer and spelling really should be improved, people will then take your poetry more serious.

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It's a good try and a emotional poem. Liked it... you'll be better in time. Keep writing!