Awwwwwwww E>
dig it

Shit, thats unreal.

Could picture it all as it was happening. I like random pieces like that. It reminds me of a poem I wrote once called "She left him with half a glass of milk and a ham sandwich"... quite random stuff makes it more interesting.

Cheers
Mo

Yea I really enjoyed reading that and agree with with the above very powerful and unreal and truly fascinating =)

Woooooooooooooow!!
love it indeeeeeeeeeeed :)

yours,
~gIrL~

Thats quite nice for a poem very descriptive but I don't see why its about life. Anyways its very descriptive and fascinatingly fictional.

Nadia

5/5

That's so deep and strange but... It's great... what a weird thought... very interesting anyway... 5/5