What can I say?
This took my breath away?
Well... that's too cheesy.
But this is really good.
I loved that you rhymed
But then you didn't
It kept me waiting...
For something I didn't know.
Lol.
Weird, I know.

Now i thought this was a song, and wat a great song it was, the tune i had really went with this poem/song.

5/5 david