Comments : Symphony of Love

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bill
    This poem surely reads to it's own beat's. I love the way you have used all the musical terms to compare with. Great imagery.

    Conductors we are together
    Hands moving in unison to drive the flow
    Building to another crescendo of sighs
    As our bodies strive to keep pace
    Passion and desire upon each face

    Loved this stanza.
    Take Care Your friend Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Definitely a very touching and passionate piece of poetry. Excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent write my friend , great job very passionate poem and quite touching if I may add ,great j9ob, keep up the good work.your friend Tracy~5/5~

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful