Bill
This poem surely reads to it's own beat's. I love the way you have used all the musical terms to compare with. Great imagery.

Conductors we are together
Hands moving in unison to drive the flow
Building to another crescendo of sighs
As our bodies strive to keep pace
Passion and desire upon each face

Loved this stanza.
Take Care Your friend Cindy

Definitely a very touching and passionate piece of poetry. Excellent.

Excellent write my friend , great job very passionate poem and quite touching if I may add ,great j9ob, keep up the good work.your friend Tracy~5/5~

Very nice and beautiful