Comments : Always Be With Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Aw. that was really great. sad, but you caught
    me. great job. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I have to admit that the flow is cool. I like the way you have worded the poem and the reason why you are lone is lucid in the light of this piece. great keep writing. 5.5

    With love
    Fsams