Comments : Orange

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Lmao.
    I still can't stand the fact that nothing rhymes with orange. =/
    Once again, wonderful poem & very creative.
    5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Very cute :) How do you think of all your topics ? lmao

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Teehee Gem that was such a cute poem ad sure did make me think .... lol
    Gosh darn I think it's time we invent a rhyming word for it ... lol
    I never know what to expect when I open one of your poems Gem .... and that's what I love about your writing, it's so original
    Take care sweets

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was really funny. It is mind boggling how some words just don't have a rhyme.
    I absolutely love how you can write so many different forms of just about any topic.
    Inspiring.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #3~
    Lol! I think it was very smart on your part to keep the word orange out of your rhyme scheme, heehee. I truly love how diverse your writing is! This was very funny, keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Lmao. How amusing of you, Gem! This is such a cute poem. A nervewracking topic in desperately trying to find a rhyme for orange--"..syringe,that's close enough!", whereas the intended humour is notable throughout. :P Kudos! Haha.
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Hahahahaha this had me giggling throughou, and I loved how you said syringe was close enough.
    This was so cute!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Weve sooo gotta find something that rhymes with Orange!!

  • 17 years ago

    by carissalynn

    Love it

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So true and funny....some words will never work in a rhyme pattern....nicely written.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So true and funny....some words will never work in a rhyme pattern....nicely written.

  • 16 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    Haha so funny! love the made up words!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kati

    Lol this is funny! and seriously, what is up with *orange*!! you can never find anything to rhyme with it! lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Rashid AlNasseri

    Lmao That is sooooooo funny loool

    syringe i dont even know what that word means lol

    dude that funny ... :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Sasha

    Orange is my favorite color

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Door hinge.. it rhymes but its 2 words.

    I like this poem vary crafty and clever.