Comments : Loving A Lost Soul

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my god, this is one of the best poems I've ever read. Excellent ... almost perfect... I love your poetry.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Sad, excellently written. Your wording is amazing.
    -Maybe this is your penance
    The wall between us
    It turns into a mirror
    My reflection can't look me in the eye
    I'm fading
    It's over isn't it?This is powerful stanza, so deep and full with emotions. Great poem, 5/5