Its a pretty good poem i think.. Not one of ur best but its still ok. Keep up ur great work on all ur poems!

Well I liked it, a little choppy but.. still lovely.

thanks for the comment.

Lovely, i like it.

I love this! I really hope you dont mmind but I am going to copy it and print it to give to my best friend. She will LOVE it! I will wait a few days for you to coment if it is okay or not. I lllllove it!