This was an interesting poem. Really bitter, from both sides, but I like how strong that emotion was expressed.

I noticed quite a few times that you missed out apostrophes where they were supposed to be:

"Her lip [stick's] plastered along your shirt,"

"[Where's] the respect we once held close,
[Where's] the trust we relied on,"

"And commitment is a [woman's] fantasy,"

"Honey stop lying to yourself, [it's] over,"

And also, in this line -

"Your useless lines and cheesy lines,"

I'm not sure if you actually meant to use 'lines' there twice or not, but it seems to mess with the flow. I suggest changing one of them.

Overall, I really enjoyed this poem. I'm just rather picky when it comes to pointing out smaller mistakes. =P

Wow this is really good. i enjoyed reading it. it was a very different type of poem, so it was especially good. you did a wonderful job writing it 5/5

~Kristina

This is another lovely poem. I like how it goes back and forth between the two. But the thing is, its never resolved. Like the husband never ADMITS to cheating, so we just go with what the wife believes?

Lol....So beautiful....well presented...i loved the way u've splitted it!Great work and soo true too...kp it up!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Absolutly superb concept, one I haven't seen before in a poem. It doesn't flow as well as some of your others, but that probably helps the poem since real life arguments rarely flow perfect. But for the concept alone superb, and I had to keep reading to find out what'll happen next, and what will be said.

X

I liked it, I think it was a true concept.
Great job, darling.
5/5
ily xxxx