Love the way you put your words...
and the way you repeated without you
the flow was really nice...

keep it up

Great poem!
I really like the sructure.
Easy words, nice flow and great rhyming.
A pleasure to read.
Well done

That is so cool, dude you have a great girt. I love writing and art as well. I do a lot of poems to express how I feel too.

--Lindsey

This poem is very interesting. i like how you put it together. you have good talent

Good job very intresting and hoping the best for you. good luck in trying to get back to them love your writening 5/5