Aww cute joebo nice poem, kinda confused with the flow but otherwise it was a great poem =]

sir hamlet my worstest enemy

Ely (MD)

Again another poem. and again a beautiful poem that was so filled with love.

5/5 David

Wow very nice it seems like a true love situation. 5/5

Awwwwwwwww thats really sweet poem!!
it were filled with so much love and passion and feelings.. it reminds me of when you first find someone new and your on cloud 9 head over heals with someone... hehehehehe

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Hey Joe,

This poem is really sweet and actually made me long for that butterfly feeling once again that seems to control your whole body when finding love.

I am so glad that you are writing about a love that often times seems so lost. It is a great reminder that if your knees do not knock, your stomach does not have floaties, or you heart fails to skip a beat then you are looking in the wrong place.

Thanks babe for the memories and the reality check.

--Sher

I really enjoyed this and I thought it was a really sweet poem! Not many people can get down with there heart thumping feelings like that if that makes since you just put it into a state where we can all relate to it I loved it so much your an excellent writer

Wow Joe,
this is another romantic one by you, this is so beautiful and true, true as it seem like every word is coming out right from your heart.
very nicely done as always.
looking forword to more of your great works.

Aw this was such a sweet poem. it radiated a love that a lot of people dont get the pleasure of feeling, a love very pure and untainted by the world in which we live. You have a way with love poems that make even the most sycinical (sp?) person relate. Wonderful job. thanx for sharing.