Aw this poem was very sad.. and I think that you definatly should post it on your MySpace to show her exactally how you feel because I think that she would appreciate it a bit more than anyone else here could. But in the long run I think that its very sweet and its so good to hear of people with good relationships with their parents, to many people out there these says aren't that lucky.

For some reason I have this urge to call my mom. hmm. Well written, it brought tears to my eyes, and i am sure that your mom is proud of you and she probaly misses you too. You did a good job, of putting your emtions in this one. please don't stop writting, the world would be at such a loss without, your true way of writting. 5/5

I'd say you ought to put it on your myspace...
i bet she'd love to read it, it's really awesome...
(i've written one,too, but in portuguese...=D)

now, speaking of the poem itself, i think it's really a beautiful one...the flow is very good...and it's something anyone can (and should) relate to...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*