Comments : The First Dance

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Real sweet. beautiful poem 5/5
    i like the words you used it created a nice flow and good meaning

  • 16 years ago

    by all because of him

    Wow i really love this poem. it has a great flow and the rhyming was good. its really sweet. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I like <333