This is your 300th poem on the site... and I love it just as much as all the others. It's beautiful, just like you. :)

**I love you without know why or possible how
undetermined, unmeasured and unchangeable
A past that brings us ever closer to a future
I love you unconditionally, and uncontrollably.**

thats so powerful however i think you meant..*knowing, instead of know*
I will love you this way because i can love you
in no other way than this: I just love you...
so much, that when I see the sun, I think of you.
so close, that your hand on my body, is my hand.
so greatly, that your eyes finding mine, are our eyes.
so delicate, that endless years could not change my heart.
so intimate, that when you breath in,
I feel the sweet air of life fill my lungs.**

the whole you hand, my hand and the your eys, our eyes thinhg is so indecribably that was so powerful right there and it just was an amazing part of the poem, i loved it. keep it up

melissa

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Ah well done. this poem is excellent and the wording and description is flawless.

5/5 always. David

I thought this was a great write and a powerful poem. The ease with which the stanzas transitioned into each other was brilliant. The flow seemed flawless and smooth and overall the poem was breath-taking.

Ah, that was the best Poem I've read in a good long while.

This was excellent, Your a very good writter i enjoy your poems
xD

That was beautful, you have a great way of expressing your feelings with words.

Reminds me of a Shakespeare or Neruda piece. It flows so well and is so very beautiful that I am not so distracted by all the fillers. Nice job!