by Vanessa
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Just returning the favor. I love this poem. It is well written. The flow was flawless. Excellent read, and an even better write. I love this so much I think I will read more. |
by Startle Me
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What beautiful poetry. The flow was absolutely spot on. I like how every syllable count in each line is roughly the same - it really helps with the flow and rhythm. |
by Tricky Daze
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The vocabulary and flow was so great |