Omg i feel your pain....omg im cring just reading this, im so sorry...
i think it would be batter in the 1oth ph. changed stressed for depressed, it makes it seem more real, GREAT JOB!

Omg alright that poems made my cry too!!!!you have such awwsum words i wish i could write like you do!!!u writew sum wicked stuf!!!

Good work i like it because it is personal 5/5 =]]

This is such a great poem! I'm so sorry that you lost someone. It was an amazing poem.