I really liked this poem. It shows plenty of depth and feeling but why is the narrator so depressed? Why does he/she feel this is the only way for them to move on? You should've probably elaborated on what the problem was through symbolism. Good write. 4/5
Very strong writing, I could really recognise myself in it, especially the last line, I get that feeling too with my boyfriend, he can't help it, i just crash down at the wrong moments (not that there is a right moment though)
It's a very well-written poem. Sad indeed, but it's a way to write those feelings of.