Sad...indeed

i tink your improving your way of writing poems

Wow! I love this poem! It was so well written. You are amazing at what you do! Keep up the wonderful work! Goodbye for now!

Omg this poem is amazing! i totally lost myself in it...excellent job. i can relate to it so much...

5/5

stay strong
*nobody.truly.knows.me*

I really liked this poem. It shows plenty of depth and feeling but why is the narrator so depressed? Why does he/she feel this is the only way for them to move on? You should've probably elaborated on what the problem was through symbolism. Good write. 4/5

Awkward...But good.

I love the way you wrote this.
It shows a lot of feelings.
Very good.

Very strong writing, I could really recognise myself in it, especially the last line, I get that feeling too with my boyfriend, he can't help it, i just crash down at the wrong moments (not that there is a right moment though)

It's a very well-written poem. Sad indeed, but it's a way to write those feelings of.

I just love the way u express yourself and i like this poem the most

since my nickname is dracula/vampire cuz i have two sharp teeth like a vampire~~

LOVE UR POEMS~~ WAY TO GO~!!!

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

OMFG I LOVE IT!!! hehe. I have a thing for vamps ^_^ lol. Love it! great job.

Wow!!..Amazing work!!........i soo love this 1.......very strong emotions can be felt through out.......Great work!...Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Oh that was very scary! nice portraying about vampire coz im fun of horror actually and i never been write same like this.. it was great 5/5

Amazing! yeah, i use that word alot.
only thought is to change
"Vampire heart, soul wanting to fly"
to
"Vampire heart, soul wants to fly"

just sounds as though it will flow better.

5/5