Comments : Vampire heart (Self-harmer)

  • 13 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Sad...indeed

    i tink your improving your way of writing poems

  • 13 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Wow! I love this poem! It was so well written. You are amazing at what you do! Keep up the wonderful work! Goodbye for now!

  • 13 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg this poem is amazing! i totally lost myself in it...excellent job. i can relate to it so much...

    5/5

    stay strong
    *nobody.truly.knows.me*

  • 13 years ago

    by Synh

    I really liked this poem. It shows plenty of depth and feeling but why is the narrator so depressed? Why does he/she feel this is the only way for them to move on? You should've probably elaborated on what the problem was through symbolism. Good write. 4/5

  • 13 years ago

    by That Crazy Guy Chris

    Awkward...But good.

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney

    I love the way you wrote this.
    It shows a lot of feelings.
    Very good.

  • 13 years ago

    by Aure

    Very strong writing, I could really recognise myself in it, especially the last line, I get that feeling too with my boyfriend, he can't help it, i just crash down at the wrong moments (not that there is a right moment though)

    It's a very well-written poem. Sad indeed, but it's a way to write those feelings of.

  • 13 years ago

    by Needer of You

    I just love the way u express yourself and i like this poem the most

    since my nickname is dracula/vampire cuz i have two sharp teeth like a vampire~~

    LOVE UR POEMS~~ WAY TO GO~!!!

  • Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

  • Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

  • 13 years ago

    by Sydney

    OMFG I LOVE IT!!! hehe. I have a thing for vamps ^_^ lol. Love it! great job.

  • 13 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!..Amazing work!!........i soo love this 1.......very strong emotions can be felt through out.......Great work!...Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh that was very scary! nice portraying about vampire coz im fun of horror actually and i never been write same like this.. it was great 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Amazing! yeah, i use that word alot.
    only thought is to change
    "Vampire heart, soul wanting to fly"
    to
    "Vampire heart, soul wants to fly"

    just sounds as though it will flow better.

    5/5