Comments : Past the Waves

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow GATS, such a beautiful poem. It's so sad and I absolutely love your choice of words in this one. I love the,

    "You won't even look me in the eye,
    you just walked away with a heavy heart and a sigh."

    Keep up the good work =D I look forward to reading more creations from you! 5/5 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    First off this is amazing. Secondly, you just portrayed everything i'm feeling at this exact moment, and made me feel less alone. Nicely done.