A dark poem, but the last stanza gave it a sweet touch. The last stanza was also my favorite. how long have you been with this love of yours? he seems wonderful.

Sorry i haven't been more attentive. It is my loss . This poem was great. I like how it speaks of the hardships of love. The torture of wanting. Its as if relationships have a duality, the greatness of love but the binding relentlessness of needing. i loved it.