Oh Debbie
How I wish the Mystic did not have to die :( It is a sad life to spend alone. Excellent job on all three parts. Imagery and word choices and flow were all excelent. Loved the story. So much talent.

His broken heart, his dagger's home
No life if it's to be alone
Tears in blood upon the sand
The mystic took his Angel's hand

Hate to see it end:(
In death he found his love.
Great Job!
Love you Cindy

This trilogy is one of the best I have ever read! The flow, imagery and word choice are impeccable. A beautifully penned sad love story. At least the mystic found his angel in the end. I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!

Wow that was powerful so descripitive 5/5

Mmmmmm.......

His broken heart, his dagger's home
No life if it's to be alone
Tears in blood upon the sand

The Mystic took his Angel's hand
hold my hand walk with me...?

6/5

Mystics never die....

Oh, that is so great. What a great piece you have here. The imagery was so great, I can just see the Mystic now. *tear* Wonderful job! ^.^

Heartz!

Omg, omg, omg, this was frikken brilliant!!

I felt the emotion in this and it was rather sad....

The story is very intense, very captivating.Excellent write.Enjoyed reading it.

Regards
chavii.

What a heart wrenching portrayel..
I'm speechless Deb.. this trilogy is outstanding..
5/5
*Gem*

Wow. i likeyy

Very beautifully written, without (noticeable) errors of syntax. You managed to keep my interest till the end. 5/5

Oh i'm now sad that the trilogy is over. These were amazing. I don't even know what I could say that would even begin to sum up how I feel about these...I loved every one of them, the concept, the content, imagery wording and flow...You did an amazing job on all three poems. These are perfect and I wouldn't change a thing with any of them.