Well written

AWEH! That was amazing, I really loved that...it was just like a story lmao which sounds retarded cuz most poems are but yeah it had an awesome introduction and then the action, and the conclusion =) lol. However, I did notice a few spelling mistakes.. "rumores" = "rumors" and "wre" = "were" . Other than that, it's flawless really.

5.5 =)

This was an amazing poem and i know all to well where it's coming from when it talks about people saying it would never work...nobody wants my realationship to work and we're getting married. It's all about what's inside your heart, not what's inside of their's. that's why i liked this poem so much. 5/5

Oh Wow that was like AWESOME!!!! i loved it very much it was great....i dont really know what to say all i can say is i LOVE it..5/5
~Tasha